Ah...I was actually plodding away at Jikan if that's what you mean
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LOL, no - I just noticed you hadn't posted the link

I was very near sending it to Dave when I had another batch of - better - ideas and went with those. I'm touching up the dialogue tonight!
Sounds good - I look forward to seeing the results (I might even try and twist Dave's arm to let me have a sneaky peek but he is mean - I still haven't seen some of my own finished stories

That said it is probably a good idea, as it makes it a nice surprise when I see it in print

The samples look... well wait and see!!).