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Re: Dialogue Question
« Reply #15 on: 11 May, 2010, 09:24:45 AM »
"No need to worry - they're Mark II models"?

I definitely think you should stick with the "MK II"...

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Re: Dialogue Question
« Reply #16 on: 11 May, 2010, 12:27:52 PM »
"MK II TYPE - WORRY NOT."

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Re: Dialogue Question
« Reply #17 on: 11 May, 2010, 12:45:37 PM »
I take offence to the space between 'MK' and 'II'. Kindly remove it.
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Re: Dialogue Question
« Reply #18 on: 11 May, 2010, 07:18:12 PM »
Could you not just quote the part number?

Failing that, MkIIs.

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Re: Dialogue Question
« Reply #19 on: 11 May, 2010, 07:36:41 PM »
It Mark Two! No problem!

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Re: Dialogue Question
« Reply #20 on: 11 May, 2010, 07:38:49 PM »
Failing that, MkIIs.

See my previous point about the problematic lower-case 'k' ...

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Re: Dialogue Question
« Reply #21 on: 11 May, 2010, 07:49:17 PM »
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Re: Dialogue Question
« Reply #22 on: 11 May, 2010, 08:02:36 PM »
It seems to one of those things that is down to personal preference as there arent any rules even with or without the gap between the two.

If i had to choose between any of them i would choose MKII.

I did a Google search for "MKII Jaguar" just to see how the term is used or written by others.
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Re: Dialogue Question
« Reply #23 on: 11 May, 2010, 08:05:16 PM »
I dropped the line from the script.

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Re: Dialogue Question
« Reply #24 on: 11 May, 2010, 08:08:21 PM »
HAW!  :)

As a newspaper sub, I'm often asked by staff, "What's the house style for...?"

Very often an annoying conversation ensues, with the result: "Just fucking rewrite it!"

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Re: Dialogue Question
« Reply #25 on: 11 May, 2010, 08:12:22 PM »
I dropped the line from the script.

Gah! And here I've been worrying about that line all day!

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Re: Dialogue Question
« Reply #26 on: 11 May, 2010, 08:19:30 PM »

How do you differentiate between mark twos and elevens when you go for MK11s?

I was born on the twenty second of February so when I do the lottery I always mark twos.

Sounds like number two to me.