Attempts at the sample scripts

[carmdq]

Thought I'd post my stab at 'Cycle of Violence', 'cause you can never have too many of it... Right?

[CaseyJones85]

Well I'd be very happy to see your art in future progs. Dredd looks like a badass!

[pineapplehead]

Very cool work on here, here's my attempt on page 1 of the comedy story PF this is as far as I got cos life got in the way lol

[amines2058]

Pineapplehead that is amazing. I would love to have seen the full story. Very prog worthy!

[pineapplehead]

Cheers man, hopefully get round to doing the full story one day lol

[Jase]

Alright Fella's!- unfinished business with the Cycle of Violence submission, here's my latest try....

[Conceptulist]

To Jase:
Nice! your drawing of the hostage taker (The criminal scum from page 1, panel 4) is exceptionally savage, and adds a layer of trauma to Klein's origin. My only question is why does Klein's hair go from a dark tone to a lighter tone through out maturation?

To Pineapplehead:
Hilarious. I especially like the little subtle hint in the background (the 'old art droid for hire') and the subtle inclusion of a sex bot.

[Jase]

Hey Conceptualist!- thanks for the comment and looking,- the hair, looking lighter on Klein I think was an attempt to show his fringe sticking up (probably badly) in the light. When he see's himself in the mirror I wanted there to be a resemblance of his Dad.- thanks again

[3ciona]

Hi Guys
Here are thumbnails for my latest attempt at the sample script. This time it is Karn Foul Eye

C&c are more than welcome.

Cheers

[pineapplehead]

Thanks conceptualist, yeah lol, subtle haha

[dave peloe]

hey guys, had a little bash at cycle of violence after seeing some of the great stuff on here, be good to get some real feedback, be as harsh as you like , cheers

[dave peloe]

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[dave peloe]

[dave peloe]

dont seem to be able to post images , anyone know what im doing wrong?

[Jon]

You seem to be trying to post an image from your desktop, which won't be visible to the general public.

You need to put the image on a public hosting site (such as Photobucket), or in a shared public file location (such as available vis Dropbox, Google Drive, etc,) and share the link provided between <open square bracket> img]http://<file location>[/img] (

You can use the little photo icon on the left of the second row of tools, and paste the link in.

Good luck!